My love, my love, no scented flower
Could smell so sweet there in my bower -
No stars could yet adorn the night
Nor sun, nor moon, e`er shine so bright
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Another greatly expressed poem that almost reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's Annabel Lee It is THAT good as all your poems. Thank you for sharing such beautiful feelings.
I've read a few of Valerie's poems now, and not found a poor one yet. This is great too.
A flame I'm sure will never dim, always a delight to read such poems what else can top this when it is wrote..by a master thank you...regards
Bright flame that burns within my heart O let us not be set apart - very concerned lines and interesting to read! Good!
A beautiful poem. your work so reminds me of the greats Dickinson, milay, Browning, outstanding always.
Perfect rhyme scheme......ardent love theme......enjoyed it much! !
Loved the rhyme-scheme and also love in new wrapper.Excellent.
Beautiful, and loved the repetition of proceeding last line and first new line of the following stanza the add to flow and emphasize the message and emotion. The love just builds and builds, a triumph.
Valerie, this is breathtaking poem, Bright flame of Divine Love, oh when i feel it, it lingers on for eternity, everlasting light this bright flame is no matte where, no matter what never dies but only burns brighter and stronger SUBLIME POEM! ! Love and Light Thank you so much Valerie.
This is one of the best poems I've ever read. Its beautiful and timeless.
Each and every line filled with beauty and love. A love sublime that will outlast time!
This is just amazing to say the very least. You are truly a superb poet.
A wonderful write with such a beautiful ending, a real love poem,
Indeed, the brightest of flames is true love, shared only by two, perfecty expressed.......