Sunday, July 8, 2012

Bright Flame Comments

Rating: 5.0

My love, my love, no scented flower
Could smell so sweet there in my bower -
No stars could yet adorn the night
Nor sun, nor moon, e`er shine so bright
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Valerie Dohren
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G.R. Gaus 05 May 2013

Indeed, the brightest of flames is true love, shared only by two, perfecty expressed.......

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Dee Corpolongo 16 September 2012

Another greatly expressed poem that almost reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's Annabel Lee It is THAT good as all your poems. Thank you for sharing such beautiful feelings.

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John Brown 19 August 2012

I've read a few of Valerie's poems now, and not found a poor one yet. This is great too.

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Ken E Hall 21 July 2012

A flame I'm sure will never dim, always a delight to read such poems what else can top this when it is wrote..by a master thank you...regards

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Dave Walker 14 July 2012

A very beautiful poem, really like it, a great write.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 July 2012

Bright flame that burns within my heart O let us not be set apart - very concerned lines and interesting to read! Good!

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Elna Nel 13 July 2012

so beautifully soft and romantic, well done!

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Juan Olivarez 13 July 2012

A beautiful poem. your work so reminds me of the greats Dickinson, milay, Browning, outstanding always.

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Valsa George 13 July 2012

Perfect rhyme scheme......ardent love theme......enjoyed it much! !

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Neela Nath Das 13 July 2012

Loved the rhyme-scheme and also love in new wrapper.Excellent.

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Danny Draper 12 July 2012

Beautiful, and loved the repetition of proceeding last line and first new line of the following stanza the add to flow and emphasize the message and emotion. The love just builds and builds, a triumph.

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Anie Vans 11 July 2012

Awwww. Perfect. This is absolutely lovely Val.

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Kasia Fedyk 11 July 2012

Valerie, this is breathtaking poem, Bright flame of Divine Love, oh when i feel it, it lingers on for eternity, everlasting light this bright flame is no matte where, no matter what never dies but only burns brighter and stronger SUBLIME POEM! ! Love and Light Thank you so much Valerie.

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Destry Drew Miller 11 July 2012

This is one of the best poems I've ever read. Its beautiful and timeless.

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Captain Cur 09 July 2012

Each and every line filled with beauty and love. A love sublime that will outlast time!

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Godfrey Morris 09 July 2012

This is just amazing to say the very least. You are truly a superb poet.

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Hans Vr 09 July 2012

Beautiful poem, Valerie. Very touching! I wish for the best

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Heather Wilson 08 July 2012

A wonderful write with such a beautiful ending, a real love poem,

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Eric Cockrell 08 July 2012

a beautiful hymn to the shared journey of love!

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