Tuesday, July 10, 2012

Bright Darkness Comments

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I sit upon this rock,
and stare up at the sky,
with brilliance the stars shine,
to recreate would be meaningless to try.
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Amber Glistener
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Amber Glistener 30 September 2012

thanks Rick. I appreciate your praise.

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Rick Elpers 30 September 2012

Amber wow! ! ! I imagine you hear this often, your insight, imagery, depth, and clear talent as a true poet, ring loud and clear, and wise beyond your years. I really like this poem. I will be reading your work as long as you continue to write, which I want to encourage you to keep writing, for yourself and us. Thank you for this beautiful write. Rick

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Captain Cur 10 July 2012

Great lines in this poem with a stellar ending! Good work. I enjoyed reading this poem.

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