Bright Burning Stars. Comments

Fay! your thrird and fourth verses captured me! , you left me breathless! regards Bob

The sharing of a talent is one of the most powerful measures of potentially blissful union. I like the oblique way in which you introduce your protagonists and the internal rhymes that are scattered throughout this lovely poem. A fine romantic duet. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Like a fine wine, you are improving all the time showing the world you aint just rhythm and rhyme A big 10 Kev.

Fay you are an inspiration to us all, another excellent write from you, thanks 10 Lynda xx

Absolutely wonderful pieceof poetry from PH leading poets truly remarkable Fay thanks for sharing 10+++Chris

A slow fuse with a detonator creates a poem from a true innovator.Nice one again Fay, Sid xxx

This is indeed a beautiful poem, Fay. Truly a pleasure to read. Great Imagery and a wonderful easy flow. I give it a 10++ Best wishes Richard