Saturday, July 19, 2014

Briefly Seeing Comments

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Walking along side a river flowing
soft and slow,
walking along strolling
with no particular place to go -
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Smoky Hoss
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Dave Walker 29 July 2014

this reminds me of the other day when I took my six year old daughter fishing. when it was time to go home she made me carry her, and it was a hot day for sure. A wonderful poem.

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Sara Fielder 23 July 2014

You have captured the sense of euphoria one feels when they connect with nature Smoky. A gorgeous piece of writing. Very colorful and vivid.

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Eugene Levich 19 July 2014

What a lovely and happy vision and landscape- it makes one relax and wish to be lying right beside that stream. Thank you Smoky!

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