Sunday, July 25, 2021

Brief Period Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the Every night reminds me
Of the iniquity n botches
We have committed
To gain this materialistic world
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2021

Exceedingly beautiful! I liked the second stanza most.....Top score!

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Anjandev Roy 18 December 2021

Brilliant.

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M Asim Nehal 26 July 2021

Profound! ! ! ! Yes we are living a life which is slipping everyday and we are heedless towards it. A very thought provoking poem.

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