Tuesday, January 17, 2017

Brief Encounters Comments

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Their midweek affair, urbane and regular,
Conducted with care in the convivial
Surroundings of the anonymous motel,
Gave Bald Cyril and Bashful Flora
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Tom Billsborough
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Seamus O Brian 19 January 2017

Your commanding attention to detail has created quite the large peep-hole here, allowing the reader a glimpse into a scene from which, other than for your vivid and engaging tale-telling, he might otherwise immediately turn away. But alas, you have captured the poor reader's attention and he must know the fate of Cyril's bald pate beyond its immediate situation upon Bashful Flora's now convulsing lap.

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Tom Billsborough 19 January 2017

I think she gave his Bald pate a sympathetic pat but sent him back permanently to his doting wife! The spell was broken through no fault of his. It was the melon to blame!

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Annette Aitken 17 January 2017

And what a story you have weaved indeed, give food to the imagination lol

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Tom Billsborough 17 January 2017

It's pure imagination. For one thing I've a great and very unruly mop of hair! I hope you and Jude had a lovely day yesterday and bought loads of goodies!

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2017

Encounters. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Billsborough 17 January 2017

Thanks, Edward. It's nice to hear from you.

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Tom Billsborough

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