Brief Encounter Comments

Jerry! This brought smiles to my face and laughs to my soul.

A brief encounter, short/bobbed hair, short sentences, but I have a strange feeling as if in the space between the beginning and the end of the poem lie years and years. It is a great poem, actually that kind of brief encounters sometimes twist the time and one hour seems soooo long...

Sweet Jasus! One of my favorite lines From one of my favorite poems. Completely enthralling.

Ahhh what a refreshing read! ! ! That was great! ! Im chuckling after reading that one.. That was a brillant write and very much enjoyed! Im intrigued by the inspiration.. Hope by a real first meeting! ! Yet even so the style of your writing just engages a reader... WE WERE ALL SUCKED IN BY THE MADMAN! ! ! ! hahaha and we are all the happier for it... Take care and enjoying your clever poems, Mel xx

I love this Jerry, the characterisation and poetic dialogue is superb - intriguing, engaging and definitively yours. jz.

If only more madmen were available... lol I was glued to the scene, absolutely being led into her agreeing with the stranger... incredible write, I really loved this one Jerry! ! All tbe best, Lee

Why can't this be me, for a change...but NO, it always happens to someone else. She gets the perfect madman, and I get the normal abstract. this is SO good! ! ! Write me a real man and send him UPS! xxElysabeth

Very sexy, my kind of poem, straight to the point....no nonsense, loved it alana

Yes, m Mr Hughes, you have the 'gift of the gab' as we say over here. An irresistible tide of persuasion. Great dramatic dialogue! ! The best to ye. jim

This one is so sexily assertive and persuasive (a bit like it's author - even at 76 would you believe) . Wonderful to read it again. One of my favourites. You clever lad. love, Allie xxxx

Beatiful, wonderful, romantic, sexy, cocky, humorous. I love it. ~Ray