Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Brief Encounter Comments

Rating: 5.0

'What is that? ' the children cried.
'It has no feet, no eyes, no ears! '
'A snail, ' I told the little dears.
'And see? Its body disappears!
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Yen Cress
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Marvin Brato 24 October 2007

I agree, its wonderful poem for children. Thanks, top marks.

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Ann Beard 24 October 2007

I love the flow of your poem and will read it to my grandchildren. Thank you

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