Brief Encounter Comments

I really liked this - the clear narrative. I generally avoid rhyme myself - it can tend to come off forced. Poetry’s near corrosive drive to RHYME all the time is a crime.

Love is the key about life and, true love is not a decision. Nice work.

And oh so real in many cases. Thanks, David

Betrayal in love is always disastrous and very difficult to digest. Read the meaningful and thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

you have painted your heartfelt passions very well in the poem, you have used beautiful images to portray your feelings, thanks for sharing