Brief Blindspot Comments

Accessible, your poetry seems to me, and beautifully crafted too. Each word weighed and measured (probably many discarded in the process) . Love your love affair with alliteration too. Gives the poem a real mark of authority. You share your ephemeral human moment, with compassion and a hint of a smile. Lovely poem. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I love the last verse and the sad ending. I wonder now, who she was. Sincerely Ernestine Northover