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For a brief time in my youth
he was a friend of mine.
He was several years younger than me,
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Vincent, this little poem (and I’m a fan of brevity) has impact—you got me with the fourth stanza. You were wise, I think, to forget rhyming in this one. And the ending is perfect—finishing in what I’ve seen described as an envelope structure. -Glen
Thanks Glen! I cried the entire time I wrote it and I cry a little every time I read it...
A good start with a nice poem, Vincent. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thanks
So emotional poetry.... Deep in thoughts.... Piercing through the soul...10 +++... You may like to read my poems and express your views too.... Naila
Naila- Thanks for reading my poem. Glad you felt it! I'll take a look at your poems.
A sad story of tragedy told in eloquent finesse. Beautiful rendition of words in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. A great work of art. Thanks for sharing Vincent and do remain enriched.
A sad story indeed, but a story that had to be told. Thank you for taking the time to read it and for the kind words.
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Great work,greatly captures the loss of a friend - Brendon
Thanks Thulani! A great loss indeed-