Night.
Silver meanders downstream...
no moon tonight.
Bridging of worlds, the veil
...
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i thought these words.. very tranquil.. and for me.. a since of..peace..iip worth more than the five some other gave you..iip
Your poem has the elegance and unadored beauty of the music of Erik Satie. You place your words perfectly (melodically and visually) so that your message is understood without being over-explained. Your ferryman reference is particularly compelling and the final couplet leaves the reader feeling thoroughly satisfied. Welcome back, fair poetess. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥