Friday, October 2, 2009

.................Bridging Of Thoughts Comments

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Night.
Silver meanders downstream...
no moon tonight.
Bridging of worlds, the veil
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elysabeth faslund
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Alison Cassidy 15 October 2009

Your poem has the elegance and unadored beauty of the music of Erik Satie. You place your words perfectly (melodically and visually) so that your message is understood without being over-explained. Your ferryman reference is particularly compelling and the final couplet leaves the reader feeling thoroughly satisfied. Welcome back, fair poetess. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Indira Babbellapati 02 October 2009

reflective of 'this too shall pass away...'

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James Mclain 02 October 2009

i thought these words.. very tranquil.. and for me.. a since of..peace..iip worth more than the five some other gave you..iip

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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