Saturday, July 21, 2012

Bridget Comments

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One morning I found you in eternal sleep;
I tried to wake you as I began to weep,
But all my pleas you could not hear;
Oh if I could have only kept you near,
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Jessica Wright 13 December 2020

Sad poem. Good write

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Robin Bennett 21 July 2012

such a sad and emotional write. You did a wonderful job of setting the stage for your words to shine through so we could feel the feelings with you. A great yet sorrowful piece. -Robin xoox

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