Bridges Comments

'explodes towards the sky' is so celebratory and 'the two of us breathing together' is a contrasting image of calm and strong- -who Says steel and water don't mix? you mix them beautifully

Now THIS, my friend, is a well-executed poem with a metaphor front and center and stanzas connected by..well...bridges! :) This is one to read more than once and ponder it, wondering about our connections. Raynette

a very compelling poem. Beautifully rendered set of images. Thanks for sharing your love letter with us!