we live on an island fringed
with bridges, steel
things connecting us to other
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Now THIS, my friend, is a well-executed poem with a metaphor front and center and stanzas connected by..well...bridges! :) This is one to read more than once and ponder it, wondering about our connections. Raynette
a very compelling poem. Beautifully rendered set of images. Thanks for sharing your love letter with us!
'explodes towards the sky' is so celebratory and 'the two of us breathing together' is a contrasting image of calm and strong- -who Says steel and water don't mix? you mix them beautifully