Sunday, July 10, 2005

Bridges Comments

Rating: 4.9

we live on an island fringed
with bridges, steel
things connecting us to other
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Jesse Weiner
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Sue Ann Simar 27 March 2007

'explodes towards the sky' is so celebratory and 'the two of us breathing together' is a contrasting image of calm and strong- -who Says steel and water don't mix? you mix them beautifully

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Raynette Eitel 28 January 2007

Now THIS, my friend, is a well-executed poem with a metaphor front and center and stanzas connected by..well...bridges! :) This is one to read more than once and ponder it, wondering about our connections. Raynette

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Max Reif 11 July 2005

a very compelling poem. Beautifully rendered set of images. Thanks for sharing your love letter with us!

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