Two hearts of different bodies
Separated more by broken one
Silence may amplify the distance
Hiding the truth and avoiding heal
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Time to revise you and me Friend is not about hating Friend is all about loving Break the silence in us Of two separated hearts Link by the bridge And loves walk in Exchanged in our hearts, ...............touching expression with nice theme. We must have soul bridge among two hearts in order to enliven love and relationship. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10
Friend is not about hating Friend is all about loving So break the silence Lets break the wall Start build the bridge To link our hearts
Beautiful write.. Good message. Build the bridge to link our hearts..
lovely poem, lovely thoughts, it is so important to keep on building bridges.
You're quite a poetic architect, Soul; all your work is a bridge to our hearts! Impressive, my friend.
Wow! Powerful! build the bridge to link our hearts.... amazing!
very nice imagery. Your I think, has broken the silence. Awesome.
Could not think of a better way to build a bridge between hearts for love and friendship lovely thoughts...nice feelings...regards
Friendship is so important. Let the heart be the bridge that reaches new friends. Love the imagery. A beautiful poem, beautifully written. Thank you for sharing it.
a very nice wirting..... the bridge.....after the construction i would like to stand with u thr ;)
I really appreciate the msg u conveyed, one of the important qualities and aspects of life expressed. great piece of art this is! ! keep it up! This is actually a Written Soul; -p
building bridges are so important, lovely write, my friend, just lovely
A good didatic poem on the 'bridging'force.Nice.
Your keen usage of metaphor illuminates this work like the sun in the sky. A bridge is an important link that can build close proximity to our destinations and hopes. Although separate...hearts can be joined by the works and efforts of love :) Keep up the good work! ...thanks for sharing...a soul filled poem!
‘so break the silence lets break the wall’ ~ Silence is the killer the ripper waller…nicely dictioned…every thing can get apart in silence but not Love…silence is lethal…so come closer and stop closure… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Break walling bring wallowing [ecstatic with joy] lol n
lets break the wall start build the bridge to link our hearts beautiful lines, i also sometimes talk with stars, do you hear their answers?
very well written! also have to agree about the last line, loved it. keep writting (:
Loved the positive end to this poem, last stanza summed it up well. Lovely read! ; D
This verse is such a great reminder that there are times that show distance is not measured in miles or kilometers, inches or centimeters, but through the intangible emotions that divide/unite people who may be standing side by side. Great verse, Soul