At the bar
The music moved me
Till my paycheck was gone
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The only thing you left out of the bridge was Sarah Palin, excellent write.
Do not cross it... Else you fall Good touch of subconscious. Bridge is nowhere, only between subconscious to conscious.Sometimes it comes to reality when the paycheck was gone. Beautiful metaphor. Applied intelligence win overs the emotions. Do not cross it / Else you fall. Yet bridge is somewhere and it carries us from unreal to reality. Thank you. Write more... Regards, 10+ pranab
awesome poem i like it because its describing the many vices that all of mankind has n it makes one stop and think bout the things one does
Nice the words just float. Love the subject its so true. Really well done write.