Thursday, September 21, 2017

Bridge Of Dreams Comments

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Beneath this stone bridge that we stood upon once
the waters of two lochs mingle and glide
weaving a flowing concerto of life
out of the world it reflects from above:
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jim hogg
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2017

The waters of two lochs mingle and glide beneath the stone bridge. Wild geese go in flight and the leaves blowing free are amazing. Wonderful imagery is drawn in this poem basing on perception of life around. Wise drafting is shared here.

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