Wednesday, September 30, 2015

Bridge Comments

Rating: 5.0

I often sit still looking at the bridge,
Boats painted in the colour of purple stooped sky
May be sailing towards your wildest dreams
From my sweaty nightmares.
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Sanjukta Nag
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Dutendra Chamling 25 November 2015

Beautiful bridge! It lies in heart like rainbow lies in hills.

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Kinyua Karanja 01 October 2015

The words and phrases are carefully selected to express the love and emotions of heart that was once in terminated love, the yearning and longing of the love once exchanged unfulfilled promises and crashed expectations are brought together to reveal the current state of affairs, Nice and lovely poem.

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Liza Sudina 30 September 2015

riverflow always feels us with passion for life!

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Rajnish Manga 30 September 2015

The poem tells us of a lovely dream turned into a nightmare, a beautiful life turned into a source of continuous torture. But there is still glint of hope somewhere under the ashes of shattered emotions: I sense of moving backward to your adulterous arms / Yes, it is long one and a half years

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2015

A great emotive write having fantastic expression and attractive collocation. Most emotional lines I like most are.....You used to say, “Life is like a river.” If it is true, then I am certain by now, There is an unbreakable one sided bridge of thoughts That never stops connecting me with you. Beautiful poem. Thank you dear Sanjukta for posting such an amusing poem. ......10

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 September 2015

False promises and lies are very common with the muse of mankind on earth; but do move on with your mind. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 30 September 2015

Emotional poem with full of imagery and great terminologies like: sweaty nightmares, adulterous arms and dark store room of yours....all in all a complete poem of broken heart and lost love.......May be God will surprise you with something better than what u lost....Beyond ratings...yet my limitation on this site is 10+++

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