Saturday, August 15, 2015

Bridge Comments

Rating: 4.7

How do I see this bridge
Spreading from my end to the other end?
It is the road to jump my limitations
To overcome the hurdles
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Bharati Nayak
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Beautiful bridge of courage and hope. Wonderful work! Indeed a bridge takes us from where we are to where we need to be. Well done my friend!

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Suratha Kumar Rout 16 April 2018

Dear poet, enjoyed your poem. A great thought about bridge. Thanks 10+++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2017

An excellent piece of work Enjoyed the subtleties, the flow the magnificent inner poetic tone..10

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Indira Renganathan 01 November 2017

I can build for myself As many bridges as I wish Bridge, my courage Bridge, my hope Bridge, my way to success......confidence and courage are the tow helpers to build our bridge to reach our goal...Very well said Bharati...congrats and thanks...10 sure

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Valsa George 16 July 2017

A bridge is a connecting link from one end to the other.... a means to reach across to our destination! If one can construct bridges across all things staying apart, we can bring in greater harmony and reap greater success! I see your bridge as a powerful symbol!

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Bharati Nayak 12 June 2016

Thank you all for your great comments on my poem.

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You are a great bridge builder my friend. A powerful perspective my friend.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

Courage! ! I have to reach my destination. Positiveness. Nice piece of work.

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Rachel Butler 20 August 2015

A basic in us all is to build a bridge. In this tale the bridge is of positivity.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2015

I can build for myself As many bridges as I wish Bridge, my courage Bridge, my hope Bridge, my way to success. .......yes it is. One can build bridge for himself or herself to over come the hurdles of the life through courage and hope. So nicely depicted and presented. Many thanks for sharing. .....10

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Bharati Nayak 16 August 2015

Thank you so much.I am grateful that you read my poems and give your valuable comments which are very encouraging.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 15 August 2015

A great write Truly, we can build the bridge to cross the hurdles of life. Loved reading and commenting on the poem

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Bharati Nayak 16 August 2015

Thank you very much for reading my poems and adding your valuable opinions.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 August 2015

Ends with a positive note you are determined to reach the destination at any cost. Awesome drop! ! Keep inking.

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Bharati Nayak 16 August 2015

Thank you so much for your nice comments and positive words.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 15 August 2015

Nice positive lines. I want to believe in those lines. Bridges are man made usually. and a mental bridge is the best of all..

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Bharati Nayak 15 August 2015

Thank you for your appreciative words.It is nice to know that the poem is liked.

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Sekharan Pookkat 15 August 2015

Bridges are but built by sand tore and cement your fridge is built by courage h and wiso

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Bharati Nayak 15 August 2015

Thank you very much for your nice comments.Yes, courage and hope are required to overcome the hurdles.

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