Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Brides Worldwide Comments

Rating: 5.0

That slow and spectacular gait of a bride
Brimming as she is with matrimonial pride
With grace and beauty each regal stride
as invitees whisper, 'here comes the bride'.
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Julie Smith 16 January 2017

This is very beautiful and perfectly describes this special day as it should be :)

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Lyn Paul 05 March 2016

A beautiful, exciting write on that special day in a woman's life. May the love remain strong for all.

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Wes Vogler 02 March 2016

Terrific. You captured that magic day well. Takes me back sixty-one years. We still hold hands and charm the teen aged girls.

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Bharati Nayak 10 February 2016

A spectacular poem with its rhyme, rhythm, grace and grandeur , thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 22 October 2015

Before me I see a procession of brides, some bashful, some bold, some with pretended show of coyness! However, each the embodiment of feminine beauty and charm! On this day they are the stars of the centre stage! Even the plain-faced this day, turn into beauties A magical day as it is, of rituals and formalities........... So very true! For them, it is the day, a fresh leaf is turned in the Book of Life! This special day of each bride is rendered in magical colours in your poem! I loved reading it so much that I traversed back to years to the day, I have been a bride! Top marks!

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Amitava Sur 20 October 2015

A wonderful poem about brides with all minute details, very captivating and the whole poem is with sync and rhythm.

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Kevin Scanlon 19 October 2015

Wonderful epic poem about the glory of becoming a bride! In a world of woe it is such an inspiring sight to see a happy couple glowing with love and pride on their special day! Kudos to you! it's like every woman becomes in effect a goddess of love for one glorious day! Upon coveted passion's apogee I want to steal that line for a poem! Keep up the good work!

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Savita Tyagi 16 October 2015

Beautiful poem. A special day for brides world wide so well presented. Loved the rhythm and rhyme holding bride's emotions and a unique glow that she possesses on that day. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comment on my short poem.

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Rajnish Manga 15 October 2015

The poem is a collage of an emotional commentary, a documentary with close-up and long shots of bride and the guests and the spectacular atmosphere of the wedding venue. Thanks for sharing a great poem which became a favourite as soon as I read the first two lines (no exaggerations) .

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