Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Bride's Condition Comments

Rating: 5.0

I surrender to you, only one condition,
I have shining and silky long black hairs,
I have come with wine in my deep black eyes,
For you my lips are sweet eclairs.
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COMMENTS
Valsa George 16 October 2015

A poem having a lot of sensuous beauty! Thoroughly enjoyed!

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M Asim Nehal 06 October 2015

Very sensual poem. Another masterstroke. A wish of a Bride is a dream of a Groom........Loved it, loved it.

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Kelly Kurt 06 October 2015

As always, Akhtar Jawad has written a sensual love poem that speaks in a language of beautiful metaphor and purity.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2015

Thrilling expression on grace of a bride so nicely presented with attractive metaphor. Amusing and captivating......10

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