Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Bride Of The Sky Comments

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Go away and veil in clouds
lovely bride of the sky,
thy wakening light hovering high
and sweetly rhyme a carol that
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Xelam Kan™
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Heather Wilkins 14 July 2013

a beautiful poem with nice imagery. enjoyed this one

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Unwritten Soul 23 June 2013

So lovely, like a magical spill around the moon's face, a halo around it...aura of its beautiful charm..so it did dissolve you in its persona... where love glows in the darkness when night off the light, just a sphere candle that enchant the sky while kissing you with its bright..so beautifully written, as if you own it's heart settled in yours_Soul

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Saadat Tahir 14 June 2013

By far the best of yours; since i started reading your poetry Great visuals a lovely mythological aura is thrown around the feelings and nostalgia like a rich stole, woven with rich imagery and steeped in the air of limmerance (pardon the usage) Loved the old age charm imbued by archaic usage to great advantage.... class poetry....you can be rightly proud of

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The Reader 31 October 2012

Good apostrophe to the moon!

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Jahan Zeb 28 October 2012

This is another rhythmic poem with touching lines and the Allusion on Helen. Simply magnificent. Bring me back in this sweet July The vanished charms of my Helen of troy

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Yash Shinde 25 October 2012

very beautiful imagery I like your style the beautiful omages you potray.......write more

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