Thursday, December 11, 2014

Bridal Shower (Ghazal) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love is my habit I am helpless sweetheart,
Wish in your heart I get access sweetheart.
I'll not let you go you are prisoner of heart,
Pass a few days of recess lifelong sweetheart.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bisma Mirza 15 December 2014

Beautifully written.....

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Sarmad Mirza 13 December 2014

Once again a very beautiful ghazal amazing one

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Khalida Bano Ali 11 December 2014

A beautiful poem...........10

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Valsa George 11 December 2014

Let your heart ever remain youthful! Never ever lose that youthful vigour! Aging is more mental than physical. One who is young at heart never grows old!

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