Bridal Rib Comments

I will absorb (and swell and swell) 'til the day you burst my skin then all will spill (and spill and spill) an other sweet poem..the reality has kept in view...in this poem and done with very professional way..means you are a good poet and your rich brain has many ideas to express, , , but stile to say why only 4 poems yet... wish if you add more in the same specialized way..appreciate your poetry..

Very original piece...... less of me in you...I absorb Adams rib has done wonders nice to read++++++10 regards

Interesting comment on the man/woman dynamic with a lot of truth buried in these words.