Tuesday, December 22, 2015

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To build a wall
Of a broken heart
By an empathy hope
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Udaya R. Tennakoon
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Daniel Brick 23 December 2015

There is a division in this poem between ideal things imagined and real things experienced, and hope, however fragile it is, is like a plus factor - possibly turning the real into the ideal. The closing image of the chair dovetails with the image of home in the beginning. Both stand for comfort and belonging in a world which denies them to you. But the poem contains hope in their reality as things. Now if people's attitudes would have the integrity of these things, the world would greet you brightly.

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Udaya R. Tennakoon 23 December 2015

Thanks very much Daniel, for your comment.

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