Like brick through a glass door
I break every time
I shatter, I crumble
I scream and I cry
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I like the positive note of the poem. It exudes self confidence amid a sphere of poignancy. Very well written.
Thank you Hazel and Declan :) As for Richard, I think you need to improve your critical thinking skills. I am none of the adjectives you described and if you knew me you would know that I don't pity myself. I do however pity you and your lack of appreciation for poetry. But no hard feelings and thank you for reading. :)
I love the rhythm and flow to this honest and uplifting write written with panache!
wow this is amazing. great example of how we all to should vow.