Thursday, February 27, 2014

Brick Comments

Rating: 3.6

Like brick through a glass door
I break every time
I shatter, I crumble
I scream and I cry
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Katelin Taylor
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Marisa Eutsler 08 May 2014

wow this is amazing. great example of how we all to should vow.

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Katelin Taylor 19 March 2014

Thank you Khairul :)

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Khairul Ahsan 18 March 2014

I like the positive note of the poem. It exudes self confidence amid a sphere of poignancy. Very well written.

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Katelin Taylor 03 March 2014

Thank you Hazel and Declan :) As for Richard, I think you need to improve your critical thinking skills. I am none of the adjectives you described and if you knew me you would know that I don't pity myself. I do however pity you and your lack of appreciation for poetry. But no hard feelings and thank you for reading. :)

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Hazel Durham 03 March 2014

I love the rhythm and flow to this honest and uplifting write written with panache!

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Katelin Taylor

Katelin Taylor

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