Friday, October 23, 2020

Bri's So Smart! !….[ The Truth Must Be Told! ] Comments

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You may have heard it said: "Bri's so smart! "
It's true, and that's not all, BUT "it's a start"!
I also have the biggest heart on Earth, yes sir.
With that, even "Mother Teresa" did concur.
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Bri Edwards
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 December 2020

Bri is smart! Agreed! ! Bri has a big heart. i wonder whether Mother Teresa would agree to it! No comments on being world's most Prolific lover! ! Humble? ? ! ! ! let's ask the PH members. Yes! We all know Bri to be like a little naughty boy full of mischief and pranks...... :)

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2020

Valsa et al, I DO NOT 'see life as a great jest'. If i DID, i certainly would hope i could also ignore the discomforts (or worse) which life has to offer. I can, however, picture 'God in His/Her Heaven, looking down on Her/His creation and laughing hysterically! ! ! ! ! bri ;) p.s. " Krakatoa Kritic" is a friend but also a 'krackpot/crackpot'. Ha ha.

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Valsa George 16 November 2020

You are not only great in ordinary ways, but in extra ordinary ways! You are a bundle of contradictions! But you endear yourself to others with your 'huge' heart, child like candor! and more than everything, your ability to see life as a great jest!

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2020

I DO NOT 'see life as a great jest'. If i DID, i certainly would hope i could also ignore the discomforts (or worse) which life has to offer. I can, however, picture 'God in His/Her Heaven, looking down on Her/His creation and (Him or Her) laughing hysterically! ! ! ! ! bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2020

Valsa et al, I DO NOT 'see life as a great jest'. If i DID, i certainly would hope i could also ignore the discomforts (or worse) which life has to offer. I can, however, picture 'God in His/Her Heaven, looking down on Her/His creation and laughing hysterically! ! ! ! ! bri ;)

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Krakatoa Kritic #007 Part 1 13 November 2020

Bri E. may be so smart, but his meter's opaque with a density quotient, the Gods might forsake. Tongue in cheek, web's undone, but with spasms of fun, and he rhymes, so he wins! Hope no evil Bri twins' in the closet, past-postal on poems that pose in-depth pulchritude, content, punch syllable's nose! Let's leave room - puns play part, for perverse forms of art, time that melts, colored dots; watch Bri's muse tied in knots!

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Krakatoa Kritic #007 Part 2 13 November 2020

OK: Does a poem that promotes your humility suggest you're humble? Hmm! Well, as a grateful immigrant, I try to give Americans a lot of rope, but I've got my eye on you, Bri! An 8+ to 9- for a fun self- effacement that sounds fair!

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Aqua Flower 31 October 2020

A very upbeat poem. I like it! You are smart! You recognize that you have to balance the positive and negative!

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Kim Barney 28 October 2020

Funny, Bri. It's hard to be humble when you're as great as you are. I know. I have the same problem.

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Varsha M 23 October 2020

No catch but you doubt me...big question. A leaf is smart for we see it as smart. A photo is smart for we see it do A tv is smart for we see it like that.... smartness is visible. Not so negative but it's good one. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for grammar guidance.

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Bri Edwards 23 October 2020

to MyPoemList anonymous ;)

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