Thursday, January 2, 2014

Bri's New Year Resolutions: 2014....... [what It Says; Personal] Comments

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I’ve written resolutions for other New Years; how well did I do?
I don’t know! I wonder how many who make them DO follow through.....
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Bri Edwards
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Shahzia Batool 06 January 2014

By adding the name as a part of the title you have made yourself a character Bri... not an easy resolution to follow because we never forget being and staying as human beings who falter in life for sure, and it is quite human! ! !

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Kanav Justa 06 January 2014

you have a tough year ahead, , with lots of things to do.. the second point could be changed to, , , Give a pizza of hand when possible; don’t expect a pizza in return i need a pizza again: -/

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Bri Edwards 02 January 2014

my second line was typed into ph with the last word being through, but i guess ph decided that the poem would be better if the and from the front of line 3 was, instead, at the end of line 2. i agree! and when i wrote on paper my first resolution, i had the word any. then i crossed it out and typed it into computer without any. then while submitting it to ph i put the any back in! :) bri

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