Monday, May 28, 2018

Bri's Fruit Picking..[a 'more-Mature' Poem Inspired By Valsa G's*] Comments

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To pick berry, Jane n' Joe went down the dale,
and for an hour, with berries, filled a big pail.
But Joe was soon h++ny, and Jane was so, ..so cute,
AND soon cute Jane was only in her.....birthday suit!
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Bri Edwards
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Valsa George 13 June 2018

Yikes......I am grieved to see my 'innocent' poem 'prostituted'! Let poem hunter penalize you once more!

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2018

interesting, ISN'T IT? all three commenters are 'guys' and their first names all begin with K. i kan thinc of a word which starts with a c (which sounds like a k) , and PH would probably censor me if i used it, Kostas' warning be damned! ! ! they [PH] might even cikc me off of PH! ! ! the word also would look like the American football word punt, IF only the c were changed to a p. :))))))))))))))))))))))))))) bri to MyPoemList, if i didn't already send it!

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Kim Barney 04 June 2018

We all knew what the missing letters were, Bri. You didn't need to tell us. But now that you have, PH will probably censor you again.

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Kelly Kurt 28 May 2018

Such is the way with most life forms. At least until they can't perform.

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Kostas Lagos 28 May 2018

Message to PH: DO NOT censor Bri, it's a mortal sin!

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