Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Bri: Rejected By Death.... [a Small Tale Inspired By Lorraine Colon's Poem: ' Pre-Mortem'; A Fib; Humour/Humor; Short] Comments

Rating: 5.0

When, last, Bri died …….he was ignored.
Death just yawned......AND looked bored.
Bri called: 'Helllllloo! Yoohoo. I DIED.'
But Death just smiled a bit...and sighed,
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Bri Edwards
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Eugene Levich 11 February 2016

Don't plan on leaving us so soon, Ice Cream Man.

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Mj Lemon 10 February 2016

Great poem. You're back in fine form....I'll get back to Here Comes Mr. Jordan.

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Valsa George 10 February 2016

Don't worry my friend...... even if your bones will be rejected, your flesh will be really sweet with the intake of too much of ice cream and avariciously nibbled by worms! Bones are rejected in everyone's case! Queer imagination and interesting write!

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