Wednesday, August 30, 2017

Bri Is Missing You, ' Mate ' …..[ Thoughts About A Partner Who Has Been Traveling Without Me For ‘ Two Months '; Thoughts About Life Without Her; A Little Fibbing; Personal ] Comments

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It's dark outside. I'm heating water for a drink and I'm eating cold pasta with sauce,
and I've got mixed feelings about being left home by MYSELF as YOU travel. Yes, I do, 'Boss'.
I'm your ‘dog' and you know it. There's no one here now to throw me …..an OLD bone.
It's nice in SOME ways to be more ‘independent', BUT it means I'm also mostly ‘alone'.
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Laurie Van Der Hart 12 September 2017

Very touching, Bri. I'm so glad she finally found her way home. I had an empty house last week and I rather enjoyed it, but I don't suppose I would want that permanently! Didn't cook and didn't even open a can of baked beans... (Never liked them even though I am veg.) Grest poem.

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Simone Inez Harriman 02 September 2017

A lovely poem Bri. How we miss those that are a large part of our lives when they are gone even if it's only a few days or so. I'm sure your wife will adore this poem. I hope you read it to her and give her a bunch of hand picked flowers when she returns :)

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Bharati Nayak 01 September 2017

Humor apart, I am sure you miss her in a genuine way.And I am sure she knows it.A fine poem, thank you for sharing.

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Eugene Levich 31 August 2017

A fine tribute to (I'm sure!) a fine lady. I hope she returns to her Bri safe and sound.

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Douglas Scotney 30 August 2017

check the sugar content of a can of baked beans, Bri

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Denis Mair 31 August 2017

Baked beans don't have anything on him once he gets in his cajoling mode.

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