When I've pushed past my 70th year, I guess I'm allowed to dream,
of what 'Paradise' would be for me. Let's start with Ice cream.
1 - Ice cream, on a stick, in a cone or bowl, hard or soft,
…of nearly any flavor, could send my spirit aloft.
I've never bathed in ice cream; maybe I'd try it.
If you think this is too silly, why don't you just be quiet!
2 - Birds! Not the kind found in our chicken coop,
…nor the ones which, upon my head, will poop.
Since childhood, birds, those found ‘in the wild',
have brought me ‘joy'.
But I DID also enjoy (till a cat got it) a parakeet as a young boy.
3 - Peace, among all people, including every single one of us.
Why is it so many end up ‘making war' instead?
Why all the fuss?
Why indeed? ! Perhaps only a ‘god' can answer that.
Perhaps all of humans' gods should sit down and have a chat!
4 - Harmony. I've run into a definition difference; by "harmony" I did mean "peace",
not just a lack of ‘war', but day-to-day living together without strife. Let negatives cease!
Unfortunately a lack of "harmony" among people …
may only be ‘fixed' by gods, ….like ones sometimes ‘connected' to a steeple.
And, unfortunately(?) , I don't believe in such gods or God,
…for which [ if "God" DOES exist ], to Hell, I may ‘get the nod'.
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So, it looks as though no Heaven on Earth will be mine.
Perhaps YOU will be luckier, and Heaven on Earth will be thine.
bri edwards
December 16th,2021
Way to go, Bri. ;) bri best wishes to all, and......to all a good night.
Let me know when you are going to bathe in the ice cream! I will join you!
Hop in, dear Belle aka Linda Bella. No spoon needed. We can eat with our hands. ;) bri
Ice Cream... I dream and scheme and scream for ice cream! What more could anyone want?
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Bri, If there's anything better than ice cream, bird watching and world peace I don't know what is.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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Yes, indeed, on the ice cream, Bri! I love ice cream! Also, wild birds are fun to watch, and your ideas about peace and harmony are great!