Bri Edwards And The Moon Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Bri Edwards And The Moon

Rating: 5.0


The moon may not see;
the moon may not hear,
but how do we know
when we are not near?

Perhaps it sees all that we do,
and hears all that we say;
perhaps it's full of microphones
and buttons that say "play"

and others that say "volume up"
and some that say "record".
Perhaps it sees just everything
and hears our every word!

Bri Edwards And The Moon
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Speak to me, Moon --- a poem by Bri Edwards.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Belle Wassermeister 20 March 2021

This is a great poem. Now I will have to go read Bri's poem as well! (If I can find it --- Poem Hunter is so much harder to navigate than it used to be!)

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Captain Cur 20 March 2021

A beaming write! One big beautiful recorder in the sky! Better than a microphone with a speaker or we would never get any sleep!

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Sandra Feldman 21 March 2021

A fine, moonstruck poem. With imagination and 'go get'em' humor

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 March 2021

The moon may not see; the moon may not hear, but how do we know when we are not near? What a beautiful poem, dear Poet Kim.

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Bri Edwards 19 October 2022

Kim, I'm GLAD you 'at least' mentioned ME and MY poem in your Poet's Notes. : ) bri wonderful poem..5 stars

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Cowboy Ron Williams 20 June 2021

I thought you were going to tell a story about Bri mooning somebody!

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Kim Barney 19 October 2022

That story has now been told, and YOU are in it! See 'Murder and Mystery at the 1968 Olympics'.

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Bri Edwards 20 June 2021

Gee, Kim, i admire a mind which can think 'outside the box'! ! I'll try to get this into my next 'showcase'. bri ;)

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M Asim Nehal 22 March 2021

Excellent poem.5**

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Kostas Lagos 21 March 2021

Bri Edwards and the moon in one poem! This is too hard to handle! Great poem!

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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