Bri's 'Showcase-Intro(duction) ' poem:
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'definition of court-marshall. n. pl. courts-mar·tial 1. A military or naval court of officers appointed by a commander to try persons for offenses under military law.2. A trial by such..'
Darwin's poems shows how life is in arm. Seeing life from outside army life us very appealing but when you enter it and live it that you know what the truth of life is. But that attitude makes you rough and tough. Truly enjoyed.
Varsha, Thanks for comment. I'd probably be kicked out of the Army for being 'problematic' or even get court-marshaled **. (cont.)
Contd....The second poem is very heart touching. Yes sometimes we have a good relationship and we both desire to be in the relationship but something doesn't makes it happen. The third one is beautiful nature and love. Full if life and care.
The first poem is a beautiful portrayal of old age and how they need help. We don't need to ignore them but to provide them with an extra care...contd..
Wonderful 9 poems in this excellent briefcase! Enjoyed! !
Congratulations, Bri, for another successful show case.
The two war poems of Darwin Beuning are wonderful works that capture great memories.
All the nine poems in this showcase are well crafted and expressed. Your funeral poem has been in my Poem List. I have read it several times but still it never ceases to entertain.
Another well presented and wonderful show case, Bri. Entertaining and gives us thoughts to ponder about.
I tried to find 'Puff-Vietnam War Song' with no luck on PH. Is that the title on the poem's page? ? I did not scroll though all of PH's list of possibilities looking for the title. ; (
Bri, Thank you for putting two of my poems in your showcase. Perhaps readers will also enjoymy poem - Puff - Vietnam War Song..
(cont.) I don't like to be given orders I disapprove of. : ) bri