Brevity And Gravity Comments

You're experiencing subjective reality. Although it makes a great poem you should not worry about other peoples thoughts. You can become very sick... I believe that you can't ever just be thinking nothing. 'There's something to see everywhere you look.'

A well crafted, provocative poem that's certainly got me thinking! S :)

Wow Benjamin this is really something. It is real poetry. Doesn't it feel different than other things we may read or write? I'm awestruck.(smile)