Saturday, September 3, 2005

Brennan Park Comments

Rating: 2.3

She opened heavy shutters,
as she did each morning
and let the old air out
the fresh and voices in.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 04 September 2005

Shes been doing my poems as well....Anyway, good poem Herbert, very powerful imagery...If you haven't already check out my poem 'Lost To The World'.

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