Breezy Comments

s that why the breath Is so warm? ............. beauty awes being riffled by breath breeze respires by the warmth..............wonderful flow of passion by beauty through imagery imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

A breath at the neck, is better than a pain in the neck, so remember by heck, that every blooming sec, especialluy on the deck, can breath life into an old wreck. Sid

Amazing composition, love it.

Love this one Linda - it flows and reads aloud well, with it's quirky poetic question at the end, it still lingers, like a warm breath........ great stuff, and keep writing...10 from Fay.

Linda someone gave you a rotten mark to bring down the ten I gave you.Must have been some uncharitable person...... Sid.