Monday, March 20, 2023

Breezy Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have lost my chime
A gentle wind in the trees
Now leaves me bereft
When will the bells ring again
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Rob Lamberton
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Rebecca Navarre 26 March 2026

Ever so heart moving and Brilliantly shared! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 26 March 2026

Kinda like the sound of the lonesome train whistle at times can feel so comforting..

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Rebecca Navarre 26 March 2026

I've always loved the sound of the chimes in the wind.... There is something so comforting about them...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 March 2023

I am, too lonely so, I can relate to this gorgeous poem Bravo! ! !

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Rob Lamberton 23 March 2023

Perhaps someone will untangle those strings and you will make music together in the wind!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2023

Loneliness shall come to pass. State of life is just temporary. A wonderful poem embellished with metaphors, images and beautiful poetic expressions.

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Rob Lamberton 23 March 2023

Thank you Rose Marie. Your words are always musical!

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