Friday, November 14, 2008

((Breeze -(Tanka))) Comments

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The daffodils dance
As the chilly wind speeds up,
Soothing all the lonesome hearts
In this yuletide season...
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Min Sia 14 November 2008

Simple yet so powerful! It's magnificent! Mabuhay po!

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Fiona Davidson 14 November 2008

I love the simplicity of this poem...just perfect Marvin snr...thank you....

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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