Monday, January 2, 2017

Breeze Of Their Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Echoes of my parents voices linger lovingly,
As the light of day slants across Carlow town like striking gold,
Filters of sunshine caressing me like a sign of my loved ones to hold,
To talk and embrace as our hearts burst with joy and love,
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Hazel Durham
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2018

Love is a bond of hope And our lives entwined forever like the sun's constant might, As the breeze of their love sets our world alight........enchanted expression with nice diction. A beautiful poem so hauntingly delineated.10

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Chinedu Dike 12 November 2018

You have a wonderful way with words. Soulful! And so beautiful expressed. An awesome depiction of sublime love, written with clarity of thought and mind. Powerful indeed. Thanks for sharing Hazel and do remain blessed.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 September 2017

Gold, hold, told, enfold our lives into the goodness of their eternal light, That shines through the day and night, A great gratitude to the parents, a nicely penned poem.

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Dimitrios Galanis 14 March 2017

It colours so nicely the feeling of love which the relationship with our parents constitute

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Sekharan Pookkat 28 January 2017

goodness of our parents greatness of their love enriches through our life- nice write dear friend

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Susan Williams 27 January 2017

Hazel, this poem is pure love. Echoes of my parents voices linger lovingly, As the light of day slants across Carlow town like striking gold, - - - - - the alliteration of linger lovingly was perfectly chosen and the reader can hear the auditory image of your parents' voices. You did this poem perfect, my friend 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Annette Aitken 06 January 2017

This is so beautiful Hazel, I to look out for the signs from above from the loved ones that has past. a wonderful write. Annette

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Bharati Nayak 06 January 2017

Beauty is my parents loving faces smiling in delight, To see me settled and safe through each night, With the moon's glow like my parents kissing me goodnight, - - - - - - - - -There is nothing like parents' love for children.A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 04 January 2017

Parents, even if they are gone continue to shed their benediction on their children like breeze wafting through leaves! Their blessings make the children's life happy! Is there any one on Earth to take the place of parents..... I wonder! A lovely tribute to your parents Hazel!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2017

Echoes of my parents. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 02 January 2017

No substitute for parents, a wonderful tribute to parents...10+++

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 January 2017

Beautiful flow of words from your pen Hazel. Beautiful year had begin with rays of hope and love. Happy New Year. A Positive flow. Loved reading it.

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