Echoes of my parents voices linger lovingly,
As the light of day slants across Carlow town like striking gold,
Filters of sunshine caressing me like a sign of my loved ones to hold,
To talk and embrace as our hearts burst with joy and love,
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You have a wonderful way with words. Soulful! And so beautiful expressed. An awesome depiction of sublime love, written with clarity of thought and mind. Powerful indeed. Thanks for sharing Hazel and do remain blessed.
Gold, hold, told, enfold our lives into the goodness of their eternal light, That shines through the day and night, A great gratitude to the parents, a nicely penned poem.
It colours so nicely the feeling of love which the relationship with our parents constitute
goodness of our parents greatness of their love enriches through our life- nice write dear friend
Hazel, this poem is pure love. Echoes of my parents voices linger lovingly, As the light of day slants across Carlow town like striking gold, - - - - - the alliteration of linger lovingly was perfectly chosen and the reader can hear the auditory image of your parents' voices. You did this poem perfect, my friend 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
This is so beautiful Hazel, I to look out for the signs from above from the loved ones that has past. a wonderful write. Annette
Beauty is my parents loving faces smiling in delight, To see me settled and safe through each night, With the moon's glow like my parents kissing me goodnight, - - - - - - - - -There is nothing like parents' love for children.A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.
Parents, even if they are gone continue to shed their benediction on their children like breeze wafting through leaves! Their blessings make the children's life happy! Is there any one on Earth to take the place of parents..... I wonder! A lovely tribute to your parents Hazel!
Echoes of my parents. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
No substitute for parents, a wonderful tribute to parents...10+++
Beautiful flow of words from your pen Hazel. Beautiful year had begin with rays of hope and love. Happy New Year. A Positive flow. Loved reading it.
Love is a bond of hope And our lives entwined forever like the sun's constant might, As the breeze of their love sets our world alight........enchanted expression with nice diction. A beautiful poem so hauntingly delineated.10