Sunday, August 10, 2008

Breeze Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The continual tears
Of the autumn rain
Seep into the soul
Of the lonely girl
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Uriah Hamilton
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Will Barber 10 August 2008

This is pure magic, Uriah. The concatenation of concrete images is haunting. The last lines are very moving. Your are a master of sentiment, unsentimentally expressed. - Will

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Sandra Fowler 10 August 2008

How fortunate you are to have felt that breeze of love before it departed. It will come again one day and cause you to write another exceptional poem. Praise for your eloquent pen, As always, Sandra

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