Breeze Of Life Comments

I enjoyed seeing this. Versification could further justify the presentation. Much kudos, poet.

A great start with a nice poem, Arabambi. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Rule wasn't made for you alone Oh! Belligerent breeze of life It is high time you relinquish your seat... Nice poem...Thanks for these debut attempts.. 10 for it. Subhas

Good rendition of words. An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Arabambi.