Sunday, October 11, 2020

Breeze Has Brief Moment In The Garden Comments

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Breeze has brief moment in the garden
as it is not season Spring !
Flowers have to wither in a short while
Hence breeze out of mercy lingered a little longer
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Khairul Ahsan 11 October 2020

This short poem leaves a lasting appeal. Loved the generosity of the breeze in lingering a little longer than usual, so that the sprightly flowers could smile a little more than they would in a normal circumstance. The flowers too smilingly acknowledged the generosity.

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Sankaran Ayya 15 October 2020

You have enjoyed the poem thoroughly and written nice piece of comment in appreciation Thank you poet Khairul Ahsan

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