Monday, September 10, 2007

Breeze Comments

Rating: 5.0

Breeze a great gift of nature
Embraces every one in its course
Cares not one's position or status
Treats all as equal sure of course!
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Subbaraman N V
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Gita Ashok 25 June 2010

Wonderful poem! The first and last stanzas are brilliant. I admire the way you have used 'breeze' as the theme and converted it into a philosophy of life.10+++++

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Mamta Agarwal 30 June 2008

nature is benevolent. a fine poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 13 June 2008

the honest may suffer for sin done in some other context... yudhishtira in the epic Maha Bharatha is one example. i liked the imagery of breeze as a universal soother well wisher...

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Duy Bui 04 April 2008

I agree! Very nicely put.

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Michael Fischer 02 January 2008

I really enjoyed this piece. Well thought out and executed. Top marks! -Michael

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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