Wednesday, July 6, 2016

Breeze Comments

Rating: 5.0

O breeze!
You sing so sweet
In the summer
In the sweltering heat.
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Rajesh Thankappan
COMMENTS
Mihaela Pirjol 23 August 2016

This is a lovely ode to an element of nature. The rhyming and the flow of the poem, caress as the breeze.

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Mihaela Pirjol 19 July 2016

Loved the rhythm and rhyme of this poem, which would make perfectly for lyrics of a song.

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Rajnish Manga 07 July 2016

The poem brings to us the enchanting impact of breeze felt both during summers and winters. Loved reading it. Thanks.

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A sweet breezy poem. Enjoyed very much. Thanks.

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