Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Breaths Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don’t know it’s love or something else,
But when I don’t see you at least once in a day,
Don’t like to speak, when constrained to speak,
I don’t listen to my words as to what I say,
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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 June 2020

A wonderful ode to love! Loved reading this magnificent poem sir........10/10

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Rajnish Manga 26 September 2016

Beautiful love poem where the eyes have been entrusted to do the talking in a passionate romantic relationship. But, when it could not sustain the bilateral fire, there is disappointment in the offing. It shows the poet's deep understanding of human behaviour and psychology. Thanks. Now regret the time in refrains you lost, How many breaths are left, who can say?

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Hazel Durham 14 March 2015

Original with such passion lit to shine forever with a love so desired with lines rhat have wings to fly to paradise! Superb write!

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Bisma Mirza 05 March 2015

Wow wow.... Awesome poem really! ! ! 10 on 10.....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2015

Groovy write. Beautifully composed. Many thanks respected sir. ......10

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 March 2015

Amazing poem...........................10

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