What brings the world that surrounds us leaving most of us breathless? 
Some of us reckless. Some of us beaming around faking out our life
What brings the world that surrounds us with hate, love, trust...? Then death 
No one understands the life’s love of lesson only leads to distress
                
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This poem is well good... You ever thought about getting them published... Deano x