Thursday, January 24, 2019

Breathless Comments

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Richard Wlodarski
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Rebecca Navarre 25 February 2019

Powerfully expressed! .. Very moving! .. Hope a new, with the new sunrise! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...................+++++

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Muzahidul Reza 29 January 2019

Greatly penned with good imageries, .... however dogs howl however night depresses after moon rises the sun, ........ according to the rules of universe, ..... thanks for sharing the poem

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Kostas Lagos 25 January 2019

Magnificent picture! Evil withdraws as the sun of goodness rises

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Mj Lemon 25 January 2019

A wonderful expression of hope, Richard. Hope, the Sunrise, can conquer the black dog, but perhaps it only masks the beast? So much to feel in these words. so much to think about.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 January 2019

A dynamite write, Richard............10++++++++++++++

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Richard Wlodarski 25 January 2019

Very happy that you like it, Bernard!

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Rajnish Manga 25 January 2019

Very well said. I appreciate the optimism evident towards the end of the poem. One Hindi movie song says- More the darkness at night, more shining will be the morning next day. Thanks.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 January 2019

Thank you so much, Rajnish. I appreciate your reference to the movie's song. So much that I just might write a poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2019

A high spirited short work full of optimism! I sincerely admire the undertone....10

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Richard Wlodarski 25 January 2019

I am humbled and greatly flattered, Dillip. Thank you so much for your support and encouragement!

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