Friday, November 9, 2018

Breathless Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never knew a mere mortal
Could have that effect on me
You've turned my whole world upside down
And made my heart go spinning 'round
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Ray Hansell 13 November 2018

At least once in a lifetime we'd all like this feeling. Especially when it's love involved.

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Practicing Poetess 14 November 2018

Thanks, Ray! I don't know of too much else except love that could cause this feeling- - except possibly an extreme roller-coaster ride in a theme park! : -D

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Carl Roussell 12 November 2018

I pause to catch my breath, and I find it isn't there - cool way of describing love

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Practicing Poetess 12 November 2018

Thank you, Carl! Your comment was pretty cool, too! : -) We poets are a special breed!

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Louis Rams 09 November 2018

it was a mere mortal heart that tore your love apart

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Practicing Poetess 09 November 2018

It was a mere mortal's love that took my breath away! Thank you, Louis, for reading & commenting! Be blessed! : -)

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Sandra Feldman 09 November 2018

Love can do the strangest things. But to be able to condense them beautifully and vividly into a poem, That is extraordinary to do, , , and you have done it so well too!

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Practicing Poetess 09 November 2018

Many thanks, Sandra, for the sweet compliment! Yes, like the Mickey & Sylvia song in the film 'Dirty Dancing', Love is strange! : -)

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Susheela Shiju 09 November 2018

well penned dear! true love gives so much joy in our lives! 10

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Practicing Poetess 09 November 2018

Thank you so much, Susheela, for reading and rating! : -)

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