Saturday, November 7, 2009

Breathless Comments

Rating: 4.8

One, Two, Three.
I close my eyes.
I let time pass by
Too scared to move
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Monica Rose
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Karina The Cat 15 December 2009

I Like This One -Karina

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Amber Muth 21 November 2009

i really enjoyed this poem of yours especially with the mystery and loving emotion and much detailed made a strong poem that got my attention. Good job Monica :) -Amber

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good piece.. i enjoyed it.. a bunch.

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Deborah Cromer 07 November 2009

Interesting to read. Mystery and emotion combined to create an intense piece of work. Good description and nice choice of words. Good job on this! Debbie

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Allan O 07 November 2009

very nice Monica..I enjoyed reading this...thanks ~^..^

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